Light
Feels good
Like the sun
On my skin
On a warm day in May
Dark
Feels bad
Like a rainstorm
Soaking me
In the midst of November
Light
And dark
Seem to contrast
Like one is always negative
And the other always positive
But without last November
May will never come
And so it is
With light
And dark
Feel all the feels
And remember
You’re alive
And so it is…
This poem was written for this week’s dVerse Poetics. The prompt was to use a piece of instrumental music as inspiration for a poem. I have a lot of playlists of instrumental music in my Spotify library, but choosing a piece was harder than I thought. I eventually went with a piece for which both the title and the music spoke to me. This seems to be intended for meditation and relaxation practices.
Very nice to drift away to, and you poem compliments the music perfectly.
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Thank you. Indeed, I used to fall asleep to this kind of music.
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❤ ❤ ❤ So simple yet so potent. This is the kind of music I like to go to sleep to when we have a power outage, the sound machine can't play, and I have to rely on my phone and its battery to find dreamland.
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Thanks. I don’t have a sound machine, but I love to drift off to sleep listening to this music too.
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You’re welcome.
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Beautiful and very, very wise!
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Aw, thank you. 🙂
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Love the measured contentment that runs through your words and the music, yielding peace and strength.
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Aw, thanks so much.
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This would work well for meditation, which contains both light and dark as well. (K)
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I agree. Thank you so much for commenting.
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Beautiful, Astrid, both the poem and the music. You are right we need the black and white in our lives and perhaps even the grays. Well done.
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Yeah, of course we need the greys too. Thanks for your kind words.
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You are most welcome.
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feel all the feels. this i struggle with.
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Me too. Thanks for stopping by.
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I’ve been listening to every piece of music before I read and comment on poems, and your ambient instrumental music has set me up for the day, Astrid. It’s morning here and I’ve just started again. You have certainly encapsulated the nuances of light and dark that I heard in the piece. A warm day in May speaks to me and the rainstorm in November reflects the past week. I love these lines:
‘But without last November
May will never come
And so it is
With light
And dark’.
I agree with Dora about the measured contentment.
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Aw, thank you so much. I rarely listen to this type of music in the morning but maybe I should.
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Lovely poem Astrid
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Thanks, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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We need light and darkness–the endless cycles.
This is relaxing music.
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Thank you so much for commenting. I agree completely.
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You’re very welcome!
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Love the piece of music Astrid like a tone poem and I love you riding very cool my friend. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thanks so much!
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Indeed… we cannot live only with light, there has to be darkness to… if nothing else, how would we even notice the light.
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So true! Thanks for stopping by.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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I do a yoga / meditation thing most mornings, thank you for introducing me to this piece of music. I have saved the video and will use it I am certain. Love the words that went with it.
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Thanks so much. I love this piece too.
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I like the simplicity of the poem and the promise of hope that it carries, reminding me personally of cycles and possibility of change.
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Thanks so much. I’m so glad you found hope in this poem.
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I enjoyed the piece of music Astrid, and your words amplify the piece’s title, a great sense of time passing and the order of its passing.
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Aw, thanks so much! I’m so glad you liked both the music and my poem.
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“Feel all the feels” and live, a useful and necessary reminder, specially these days…
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Thank you so much and I agree. By the way, for whatever reason your comment got marked as spam, for which I apologize.
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hi astrid, a beautiful poem! very well written!
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Aw thank you!
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